Great idea. I'd pay to see this film.
I like this idea, too. But I think it'd make more sense with Peter in college. With him in high school the relationship with Connors makes less sense.
Unless they dual enroll him, high school student in some college classes.
That'd be a nice twist as well, and very plausible. Fish out of water scenario since he's smart enough to take college courses.
and its well establised that Parker is a smartie.
PS please note the lack of origin story in my synopsis. Origin would be encapsulated in a few fast shots hitting the high points leading up to the movie title splash leading right into Spidey swinging through Manhattan #NoMoreOrigins #GetToTheGoodStuff
(and glad people like the story idea, thanks!)
Really liked your idea. One question though, what happens to Lizard after the final battle?
Also, you forgot the Stan Lee and Kingpin cameos