Power Pack 27 NM/M

[FlyingDonut]

Power Pack 27 NM/M

 

Let the feeding frenzy begin! Also, I'd like comments from people who know what they're doing on my hideous attempt to make my listings look better. Seriously, your comments are welcome.

[Rickdogg]

Just bid I got one last week in nice condition for $5 so I didn't place a monster bid.

 

Your auctions look fine. Simple & Pic is great!

 

[supapimp]

your such the specualtor rickdogg so would this be considered shill bidding?

[lighthouse]

Great book Donut...

 

The one major suggestion I would make is to adjust the font size down on the second and third paragraphs. It's called fine print for a reason, and I think you want the info about the specific book to be larger than the payment info, since the book is what you are selling. I am not suggesting you make the payment info at 6pt type, but it was clearly readable at the previous size, so I would suggest returning it to that size.

 

Right now your blue text is size 6, the remaining descriptive text is size 5. I would go with the first descriptive paragraph staying at size 5, and the 2nd and 3rd at size 2 or 3. For comparison the text "PayPal: Fast, easy, secure payment." in the payment options is at size 2.

 

I would also suggest a line break before the "Click for other auctions" line, with that line centered, separating it from the remaining description. which will draw attention to it. I might also suggest bumping that line up one size from the rest of the fine print.

[Darthdiesel]

Brother, it looks good with border/table and html. You need some color in your life, white boy

 

Click on the link on right part of the page while listing that asks you to "spruce up your listing with html" and learn command font color= blue, red, pink,fuschia, purple, etc and surround with the "<>"

 

Find an animated gif...like spidey running or that dragon ball z guy doing the kamhammeha wave...

[FlyingDonut]

Hey, I'm all about classic stuff now - don't need that color. Its all stark, baby.

 

Here's the updated version. Battle Brady 11 with lighthouse's comments. Also, just for a kick, check out the covers on these:

 

Combat Kelly 12

 

Combat Kelly 8

 

Combat Kelly 7 - this is awesome

[lighthouse]

Wow... I never knew Greg Brady was so tough... or is that Marcia after she gets hit in the nose... "p

 

That Combat Kelly 7 is great... Any idea what the kanji translates to? I notice he repeats the last two characters...