Sean and POV's Haiku Hacienda

[PovertyRow]

What? No more Haiku? I am going to stock up on sake and contribute. Come ON. Lettuce see haiku!

 

(for the ones who do not know - Haiku is classically a 3 line poem - no rhyming needed. It is broken up as follows:

 

1st line - 5 syllables

2nd line - 7 syllables

3rd line - 5 syllables

 

It is intended to convey a feeling. Often the lines do not obviously relate to each other but the finished piece has an overall tone. Usually the seasons are involved but here in comic land we have our own seasons. Mine tends to be the pre-code season.

 

So let's hear some haiku!!!!!!!

 

Boards missing haiku

Moderator's sharp eyes guard

Who is next to fail?

[Ze-man]

Raga Veen silent

 

Multiple frets are too tall

 

Music soon will come

 

[PovertyRow]

Raga Veen silent

 

Multiple frets are too tall

 

Music soon will come

 

Whoah! You DO listen!

 

Seriously - transitioning from sitar to rudra vin caused my right hand to have problems: basically a long nerve is being caught between two tendons. For now some cortisone and pohysical therapy is in order. If no better results soon then surgery. Not looking forward to that as I had surgery that is still healing on my left hadn from the sitar. But whatever it takes!

 

Tendons squeezing nerve

Darkness blankets the daylight

Food still is prepared

 

(I think you will get that one, Kenny - even if those kids at school Do tease you!)

[PovertyRow]

Raisins are nasty

I tried to like them, really!

Look like rabbit turds

 

Doc won't really try

Perhaps too much fru fru here?

Effort is reward

 

(I like them raisins!)

[CAP Freak]

Raisins are sweet

two scoops in my Raisin Bran

Don't forget the milk

[CAP Freak]

Low grade Spider-mans

I love them so, Who am I?

I'm Mac Man silly

 

[FlyingDonut]

Another long night

Many comics to be scanned

eBay before sleep

[PovertyRow]

Art prices decline

Will comic prices follow?

Buyer's bated breath

[FlyingDonut]

Everything costs more

Disposable income down

The Great Crash is near

[CAP Freak]

The Dollar is down

Apocolypse coming soon

Our Planet is doomed

[FlyingDonut]

Funny books often safe

I hope this remains the truth

But am quite worried

[PovertyRow]

Here come the haters

The iron turning to rust

How stark will it be?

[Flee-Marquette]

Universal truth

haiku better with sake

to write or to read

[DrWatson]

Inebriated

the best way to write haiku

Understandably

 

 

[FlyingDonut]

Inebriated

The best way to do most things

Except drive or dance

[PovertyRow]

Inebriated

The best way to do most things

Except self pleasure.

[Norrin_Radd]

Inebriated

The best way to read the boards

Understandably

 

[PovertyRow]

Inebriated

The best way to read the boards

Understandably

 

First and third one word

Second monosyllabic

Patterns revealing

[djpinkpanther67]

Modern Marvels Suck

Horrible story arcs are hurting the brain

Fire Joe Quesada

[FlyingDonut]

Inebriated

The best way to read the boards

Understandably

 

First and third one word

Second monosyllabic

Patterns revealing

 

Five syllables quick

Seven much more difficult

Not impossible