Vampirella

[easyt63]

Hey all,

 

I drew this the last couple of nights. I love collecting OA so i have been trying to develope my own skills. Let me know what you all think. Thanks for looking.

 

[Timely]

Love the body & shading you did on it. Not too keen on the face and I think the neck is a little too long. All in all it's better than most! (thumbs u

 

West

[easyt63]

Thanks for your thoughts. Yea i am still having some problems with the faces. I have not been drawing for very long so i am happy with the progress i have, seeing that i have been teaching myself.

[easyt63]

86 views and only one comment come on guys give a new artist some feedback.

[Extremo Man-migration]

The biggest problem seems to be the face. Work on that! Plus the boobs look too perfect. Like she had surgery.

 

But it's a nice rendering, shading isn't bad at all, keep at it!

[Khumbu]

The bottom looks fantastic! I think the boobs should be a tad fuller, and the arms should be fuller as well. Vampirella was almost a modern day Boticelli, very luscious. The face just looks wrong. BUT...who am I to talk I can't draw at all, I talk a semester of art and still have to buy my art on e-bay and at conventions

[Pirate]

put a bag over her head and it's a go

[grandz-migration]

If you're looking for actual critiques, I recommend a site

like the Drawing board.

http://www.drawingboard.org/index.php

 

There are some helpful tips from professional, and non-professional

artists.