Cat Posted November 14, 2018 Share Posted November 14, 2018 4 hours ago, Sitcomics said: No spoilers but the coffee is explained in the story. Cheers for the response. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sitcomics Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 Thanks to everybody who weighed in on which covers to use. Here's the official color cover for Startup Binge Book #3 on sale July 31st, 2019. (pencils Ron Frenz, inks by Sal Buscema, colors by Glenn Whitmore). The website for all the other issues is here. ADAMANTIUM and nepatkm 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 I would come up with a new name besides 'Underworld'. Fresh-always try for fresh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ADAMANTIUM Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) 7 minutes ago, kav said: I would come up with a new name besides 'Underworld'. Fresh-always try for fresh. It's a little tongue and cheek with "world's greatest assassin" anyway, so maybe that's how it's written inside... Edited March 17, 2019 by ADAMANTIUM "" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 4 minutes ago, ADAMANTIUM said: It's a little tongue and cheek with "world's greatest assassin" anyway, so maybe that's how it's written inside... Best tongue in cheek is FRESH!!! Look at pulp fiction when it came out-very tongue in cheek but all that stuff was fresh! It changed cinema. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 If you used tired words like 'underworld' 'vic' 'perp' etc it's just BLAH ADAMANTIUM 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) I'm not a writer but what would be a fresh word you could use instead of underworld? Ps cops dont say vic anymore they say RP (reporting party). If it's a dead person then they are referred to as 'the deceased'. and they dont say perp they say 'subject'. Edited March 17, 2019 by kav Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ADAMANTIUM Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 6 minutes ago, kav said: I'm not a writer but what would be a fresh word you could use instead of underworld? Ps cops dont say vic anymore they say RP (reporting party). If it's a dead person then they are referred to as 'the deceased'. and they dont say perp they say 'subject'. Syndicate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 2 minutes ago, ADAMANTIUM said: Syndicate? overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ADAMANTIUM Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 The syndicate is common, but I think has enough edge and is generic enough to create mystery and also be more specified later... Idk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 Cops will say victim in like a police report "Individual was the victim of a robbery on Feb 12". No cop has ever said "Individual was the vic of a robbery". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 Just now, ADAMANTIUM said: The syndicate is common, but I think has enough edge and is generic enough to create mystery and also be more specified later... Idk It's a toughie but I would come up with something or just leave it out. Maybe "Wanted dead or alive by the hoover street crips". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sitcomics Posted March 17, 2019 Author Share Posted March 17, 2019 I love the feedback. Thank you! Artist actually added the text and I really liked it. I publish mainstream super-hero books for families to read together including many 8-13 year olds who aren't as aware that some terms are less fresh than others. And it's familiar enough to parents who can explain it without having to google it. You'd have to try the individual comics to see if they're for you. They're available in print but are currently free to read on ComiXology Unlimited as seen here. kav and ADAMANTIUM 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domo Arigato Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) 14 hours ago, kav said: I'm not a writer but what would be a fresh word you could use instead of underworld? Yeah....something cool, hip, and new. Rufus? No no no.......RUFALICIOUS!!! Edited March 17, 2019 by Domo Arigato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 1 minute ago, Domo Arigato said: Yeah....something cool, hip, and new. Ruffus? No no no.......RUFFALICIOUS!!! Spankmeisters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oakman29 Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 On 11/13/2018 at 8:33 PM, Sitcomics said: Here's Ron's fully penciled version of the chosen cover that'll be on sale in 2019 Awesome stuff. kav 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kav Posted March 17, 2019 Share Posted March 17, 2019 14 minutes ago, oakman29 said: Awesome stuff. Surprised a pro colors in all the blacks in pencil instead of just putting an X in the areas needing black tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
