What does that diarrhea mess of a run-on sentence even mean? You haven't sent the book yet, have you? If you haven't, don't. Walk away from what will surely grow into a larger headache of a deal.
Sentence make Hulk head hurt!
:: Amen! That was one of the most astounding run-on sentences in world history. Whether PM or public post, that kind of communication should qualify someone to be banned from the Internet. I pity the ones responsible for grading his school papers.
A semi-related thought...
I just found Kingdom of Loathing, and it is an excellent time waster. However, they actually have you take a brief test of literacy before you are allowed to use the chat function (i.e. the difference between their, there, and they're...when to use its or it's...etc.). I thought it was equally hilarious and brilliant to require what is in essence a license to chat.
Sounds like a plan to me. That run-on sentence was a license to kill!
Okay, sorry for the derail. Back to probation discussions...